a)Earlier this evening a man was shot and killed by police officers downtown. The man had a gun and wouldn't put it down, so the officer on the scene shot and killed him. This is the second incident like this in two weeks. [REPORTERS NAME] is standing by at the scene.
b)Last night a man severely attacked his wife with a knife after an argument.
c)The Food Sciences Laboratory at Cooper State University finally released the results from their yearlong study on the effects of beets. The study indicated that an increased consumption of the vegetable can reduce foot odor by more than 50-percent.
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Remember you don't want to start a lead with "when" it happened -- start with "what" happened.
ReplyDeleteDitto for "C" -- open your story with the results of the study, then say who did the study.
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